Thread:SW8573/@comment-1785597-20120621012740/@comment-3153244-20120622064659

Actually, now that I've read it again in more depth and with more time, it seems to be better than before. I don't mind whether or not main characters are clear in a fanfic, as long as it's good, then I'll read it! Everything seems to be cleared up right now. I should really change the "It isn't bad" to "It's good/excellent!". Is there some "extra text" at the end of Chapter 1? I've had it open for so long, I'm not sure if I added something accidentally to it, so can you check for me?