User blog comment:AlthaBlade/Collaboration Fanfic! :D/@comment-5294711-20121118111739/@comment-3153244-20121209060000

Sorry Meta, I haven't had time to look for your post. I found it:

Ok, since I'm also writing a fanfic at BCoW, maybe I'll give this a try to test my fanfic skill (and to revive this). (Note: Don't add if you don't want a dark chapter)

Chapter 8 - Despair
Today, I don't even dare entering my own home. Instead, I'm just wandering around the door, too scared to meet my Mom and Dad. But Mom spotted me through the window, so she went outside and shouted:

"JUSTIN! WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN?! WHY DID YOU GO OUTSIDE AT MIDNIGHT?!"

"Mom, I... I got captured by a Regen Pink Bloon and met some..."

"ENOUGH!"

Mom then rushed to me, and planted a little device on my Bionic Arm.

"Mom, what... what's this?!"

"A tractor... and controller!"

"Wait... WHAT?!"

"You've been to so much trouble! I can't stand letting you go whatever way you want anymore! So I must force you back home when you go somewhere dangerous!"

"Mom...but..."

"SILENCE!"

Mom then returned back home with a long sigh, when I tail her to get to the dinner table to have the most unpleasant dinner ever. Dad didn't ever bother talking to me, and just sigh all the time. Still, I can sense a small smile on his face, knowing that I've been saved yet again. Wait... is he holding a remote for my controller?! Aww.... f**k!

The next day, when I was walking along Main Street on the way to school, suddenly I see my classmates running panically everywhere. One of them ran past me and shout:

"GO BACK HOME WHEN YOU STILL CAN, IDIOT!!!"

"What....what happened?!"

"LOOK FOR YOURSELF!"

I then ignore the warning, then proceed to the school despite all the desperate students around me, not that I'm so hard-working I want school or anything, but because I want to know what's going on, and it seems the controller didn't force me back because my parents didn't think my school would be a dangerous place, and if I attempt to run back home it'll drag me to school anyway.

When I arrive at school, there was a huge shadow on it, so I look up to the sky and am terrified. What I see is a... Z.O.M.G.!!! I then look back at the school, just to find out that two thirds of it has been obliterated and there's blood and gore of my friends and teacher everywhere, the school is now technically a horrifying graveyard... with all the tombs broken!

I then panic and attempt to run back home, just to find 5 B.F.Bs blocking the way. I then attempt to take the opposite direction to run to nowhere, just to find 10 M.O.A.Bs. That's it, I'm surrounded by blimps! The blimps also kill everyone in their path, leaving blood and gore everywhere on their way as the cries of the monkeys engulf the whole city. I must be next....! The only thing on their way now is the very me! In a desperate shout, I call his name

"SOMEBODY SAVE ME!!! EEEEEEEEEEDDDDDDDDDGGGGGEEEEEE!!!!!"

"What is it?!"

Edge then appear from nowhere and hi-jump past the blimps and was about to land next to me. I thought it would be some Big Damn Hero moment, but no, 5 M.O.A.Bs and some Ceramic Bloons from last time, which just appears to "help" the blimps as if they needed any help at all, quickly attacked Edge and killed him almost instantly. As his blood drops on my head, I faint out of fear and despair.

..."It hurts! No... it hurts so much! AAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!"

I then suddenly wake up because of the unbearable pain, just to find my Bionic Arm crushed into pieces along with the tractor, and the Z.O.M.G. right in front of me...

Is this the end?