Thread:SW8573/@comment-1785597-20120621012740/@comment-1785597-20120622070949

Ahh, thanks! Here's the last paragraph of chapter 1. The extra letters at the end was just some random thing that Chris felt like putting.

'''Ahh, sorry. I really got sidetracked. I was just having all of these thoughts while talking with my friends.. Where was I...oh yes, Ocean Road. I don't remember it clearly, but I'll try my best. I'll stop for now, I need a rest. budumkmdfkmoqwmefoie'''

By the way, this is the first story that I've ever written, and I think that I'm trying to make it perfect...especially the character development, which isn't good. But it's such a good plot that I don't want it to go to waste! Just wanted to say that. :P