Thread:SW8573/@comment-1785597-20120621012740/@comment-3153244-20120621131441

I'm guessing you were inviting me to chat earlier. I finished your fanfic so far, and it isn't bad, though I didn't understand the opening (prologue, first half of chapter 1) at first. I also didn't like the first person, until I found out that it was a kind of diary entry, which means it's alright of course. I'll give you more feedback when I have more time to analyse it.