Thread:Nplopez/@comment-3153244-20120929150926

Hi Nplopez, I'd like to quickly point out a few things:

Firstly, please try and use correct grammar and punctuation when editing mainspace articles - this includes spacing between a fullstop and the next sentence. For example, ''I am a cat. I like dogs. is correct while I am a cats.I like dog.'' is not. This is also mainly due to some of your edits to the Bloons Tower Defense 5 Deluxe page, regardless of whether it was accidental or not.

Secondly, some of the categories which you added to the BTD5 Deluxe page were redundant. The page is about the game itself, not the tracks (although some of the information is good). BTD5 Deluxe is not a track, nor is it an addition to BTD5; it is separate despite the very similar content.

Thirdly, I'm not sure what other users might say about this, but I would prefer to have Extreme used rather than Extreme! on mainspace article pages; regardless of what the game itself says.

Thanks! 